Submitted by jenny on Tue, 04/03/2012 - 05:32
Development by: Process.
Written by: ????? and SVW.
Topic: Making Shish-Kebabs (“yang rou chuanr”).
Title: “How to make Shish-Kebabs.”
Plan outline:
[TS] Delicious – easy to cook.
[S1] Cut – lamb – pieces.
[S2] Lamb – skewer.
[S3] Grill – fire – three minutes.
[S4] Sprinkle – spices.
[S5] Eat.
[CS] Easy – restaurant.
Paragraph Text:
[TS] Shish-kebabs are a delicious food from Xin Jiang, and they are easy to prepare and cook.
[S1] First, you must cut some lamb into small pieces.
[S2] Then, put the pieces of lamb onto a steel skewer.
[S3] Next, grill the lamb over an open charcoal fire for three minutes.
[S4] After that, sprinkle on some spices (salt, red pepper, and cumin) to taste.
[S5] Finally, you can eat the shish-kebabs.
[CS] This food is easy to make, but most people prefer to go onto the street, and visit a shish-kebab stall.
Development by: Process.
Written by: Shi Xin Lin, 0507.
Topic: Writing a paragraph.
Title: “How to write a paragraph.”
Plan outline:
[TS] If – write – many – steps.
[S1] Choose topic.
[S2] Write down title.
[S3] Write many ideas.
[S4] Make plan.
[S5] Write the text.
[CS] If do this – good writing!
Paragraph Text:
[TS] If you want to write a good paragraph, you must follow many steps.
[S1] First, carefully choose a good topic.
[S2] Then, choose a clear title, and write it down neatly.
[S3] Next, write down many ideas on some “dirty” paper (“brainstorming”).
[S4] After that, make a clear and simple plan.
[S5] Finally, write the text.
[CS] If you do this, you will have a good piece of writing.