Development by: Time.
Written by: Feng Ya Qi, 0503.
Topic: Development of FYQ’s study life.
Title: “My Study Life.”
Paragraph Text:
[TS] My study life has changed over the course of my school career.
[S1] Since my parents were very busy when I was five years old, they put me into the local kindergarten.
[S2] When I was seven years old, I studied at our district primary school, as it was near my home.
[S3] In middle school, I changed school twice; my parents wanted me to live far from them, so I could learn how to look after myself.
[S4] When I got to high school, I was already 16 years old; I now realized why my parents wanted me to change school, and I thought this was useful to me.
[S5] Now I am 18 years old, and I have entered college; it is far from my hometown, but I like to study there.
[CS] During this time of my study career, I want to say that I will not change school again, but will choose to stay in Xin Jiang.
Development by: Time.
Written by: Shi Xin Lin, 0507.
Topic: Historic changes in Xin Jiang.
Title: “How Xin Jiang has changed over time.”
Plan outline:
[TS] Population up – development up – over long time.
[S1] “Desert – nothing.”
[S2] “Silk Road.”
[S3] “Villages – poor.”
[S4] Towns –“bing tuan”.
[S5] Cities – modern – rich.
[CS] Cities – better and better.
Paragraph Text:
[TS] Over the past 2,000 years, Xin Jiang has changed a lot.
[S1] At first, Xin Jiang had nothing except desert.
[S2] In the Han Dynasty, the “Silk Road” was very famous, but there were still very few people in Xin Jiang.
[S3] In time, there were some villages, but the people were poor.
[S4] As time went by, towns came, and many “bing tuan” were built.
[S5] Today, Xin Jiang has many modern and rich cities, and the people have also become rich.
[CS] We believe life in Xin Jiang will become better and better!