按照结果发展

                                                                          
在这一类型的段落写作中，你从原因开始，然后向前分析结果（这里有五个）。如以下图示：     C =====> E + E + E + E + E.             (“C” 是原因, and “E”是结果.) 
 
不要和“按照原因发展”混淆，这是上一个部分。
接下来，我们讨论在一个淘气的男孩做了错事之后，将会发生什么。   
Development by:    Effect. 
Written by:    SVW. 
Topic:    What happened to Bobby, after he broke his mother’s vase.  
Title:    “What happened to Bobby, after he broke his mother’s Ming Dynasty vase.” 
Brainstorming:  Vase–Ming–basketball–mother–cried–“grounded”–games–antiques– punishment–afraid–parents–friends–“pocket money”–Friday games. 
 
     主要结果: Beaten  – no supper – no pocket money – afraid of vases – “grounded” in bedroom.
 
     按照重要顺序排列结果: (#1) Beaten  – (#2) no supper – (#4) no pocket money – (#5) afraid of vases – (#3) “grounded” in bedroom. 
 
首先，你必须写下一个原因，由此，按逻辑产生每一个结果。
 
由于该段落是一个“过去时态，描述性”段落，你就需要确定如何安排这五个结果(E1, E2, E3, E4, and E5)；是按照时间顺序，还是按照重要程度顺序？你决定，我是比较喜欢“按照重要程度”排列。
 
小心在这一段落的时态的语法运用。你正确使用过时态真正排列过顺序吗？   
 
Plan outline:   
     [C]      Bobby – dropped – vase. 
     [E1]    Beaten. 
     [E2]    No supper. 
     [E3]    “Grounded” in bedroom. 
     [E4]    No pocket-money. 
     [E5]    Afraid of vases. 
     [CS]    Avoid vases – forever. 
 
 
从这个构思来看，可以这样展开句子。粗体是事情的首要原因，结论（指明下文）用斜体表示。
 
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     [C]    Bobby broke his mother’s 1432 Ming Dynasty vase last night, as he was playing with a basketball in the living room; this single action changed his life for a long time, as his parents became very angry. 
     [E1]    His father beat him with a belt many times. 
     [E2]    Bobby’s mother cried for a whole day, and during this time, she refused to cook any food for her son.
     [E3]    Both of Bobby’s parents “grounded” him for two weeks, with no excuses whatsoever; this meant that he had to remain in his room, even when his friends wanted to play games in his back yard. 
     [E4]    Bobby used to receive ‘pocket-money” from his parents every Friday; he now gets nothing. 
     [E5]   He used to be willing to handle all of his parents’ antiques, but now Bobby is afraid to touch anything old, and especially vases of any description.  
     [CS]    The final results of this incident will stay with Bobby for a very long time. 
 
    关于“按结果发展”这一类段落最后的注解：确保在原因和五个结果之间有清晰的逻辑联系，确保五个结果按照合理的顺序排列（要不按照提高的顺序，要不按照围绕主题的顺序）；确保五个结果在整个段落中互相协调。